Revision Process

As far as revising went I think it was a great thing to do no matter how good or bad you write because it's hard to catch everything the first time you write something. I love to have someonelse's perspective because sometimes I make up sentences that make absolutely no since. I feel that my original draft was going to just be okay and not my best because first I did wait until the last minute to write my paper and second I'm not really a good writer. I don't think it was horrible, I just knew it wasn't the best. I feel that in my writing I repeat a lot of the same words and I don't describe things very well. I think my revisions were great, and I'm glad that everyone was so honest and critical. My paper definitely needed it and I think the revisions will be of great help when I go to write my next paper. I like the drafting process because everytime you write the paper it gets better and better and everytime you notice something different that you can change to make your paper better. Everyones comments were very clear, a lot of them are little things that can easily be fixed. It's difficult because you really have to think and come up with some new and good ideas to write but easy because you know exactly what you are looking for in your writing. It's going fine, I just hope I have a good paper in the end.